there are 2 different essay that need to be reading, then write a new paper .
1 it must contain one thesis statement in the end of first paragraph, then have to 3 body graphs with topic sentence in order to support the these statement.
2 one body paragraph need 2 quote that choose in different 2 essay, and quote should set up, integrated, punctuated, and cite properly, the quote should analyze it not summarize it.
3 In the essay, no ‘I’ or ‘In my opinion’, no’ people ‘.
4 In the first paragraph, the author need introduce about 2 essay, and summarize their points in 1st paragraph.
5 Transitions between paragraphs are not just mechanical, but explain real connection between real ideal in paragraph.
6 all body paragraphs effectively support the thesis.
7 essay need MLA style, and i will give you a sample writing that i have been written, please follow that format.